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1 We like fantazy.
All my family likes to read very much. My mum likes to read detectives; my father likes to read classical literature. But all my family likes FANTAZY! One of our favorite writer is Sergey Lukuanenko.

2 Lukuanenko biography.
Sergey Vasilevich Lukuanenko is one of the most famous science-fiction writer of Russia .He was born in Karatay, Kazahstan, 1968, 11 of April. He graduated therapeutic department of Alma-Ata state university. He has a wife Sofia and 2 children Artem and Dania, he has 2 pets (dogs). He began to write in 1986. His first book was published at the end of 80th. . His books are known all over the Russian for example «Day patrol, Night patrol, Twilight patrol». There are 2 films produced on this books. But my favorite book is «Boy and darkness».

3 Boy and darkness about.
I read «Boy and darkness» by Sergey Lukuanenko
Last week. My parents like it very much and they advised me this book. This book is about adventures, search, strange worlds and miracles. A story about real war between light and darkness, and a story about a real frednship.

4 My advice.
,, Boy and darkness’’ is very interesting book by Sergey Lukuanenko. I advice everybody to read not only this book by Lukuanenko. As for me I will reed many others fantazy books.